One of the photos from this weeks photo shoot.
The industry
track I want to address is the one that got Lupe Fiasco kicked off of the stage
at the Inaugural celebration. I don’t want to address whether it was right to
kick him off stage, or whether I agree or disagree with his opinions. I am just
going to break down the song. The instrumental really captures the emotion of
the song, and propels the flow of the track. The synth tracks are very dark and
very dissonant. The synths are also kind of all over the place, which puts you
on your toes. It also has a piano which sounds semi-sad, and the other half of
the piano sounds triumphant. This combination gives the emotion of being pushed
down and getting back up stronger. This fits with the theme of the song because
he is essentially asking his listeners to stand up for what they believe in,
and speak against the government. I also like how he has the gun shots not as a
main part of the beat but as an accent to his lyrical content at the moment. He
has some very controversial lyrical content that pushes listeners to analyze
the world around them and pay attention to the things that are controlled by
the government. The reverb and open sound to the drums also puts the feel of
hysteria into the track. The snare reverb swells out and back in as if it is
trying to put the listener is in a simulated state of shock. I also feel like
Skylar Grey has the perfect voice for the chorus. Also, I really like on his
third verse how the beat is EQ'd to make it sound distant and muffled, and how
that really brings out his voice to be heard. It kind of portrays how if you
keep speaking your voice gets louder. I want to end it with saying that I have
become a huge fan of Lupe over the past few years. I think he may be the best
artist that is currently putting out albums. He is definitely top three of
current artists, and in my top five of all time. You should definitely go check
his music out if you haven’t been keeping up with it.
For my underground track, I listened to an artist from Maryland that goes by Infamous A-Smooth. The song I listened to was Step in the District. First and foremost I respect all artists, so I try and give them as much constructive criticism as possible. I always listen to the track about 20 times to get a good idea of what to say. I liked a few things about this song and a few things that I wasn’t feeling. I thought the hook was very repetitive. I like the idea of the hook, but maybe switch up a few things on every other two bars. Like instead of "you say you want it you say you got it" every time, come up with another bar and plug it in every other time. That’s just a suggestion though. Also, I don’t think the delay on the dub of the verse worked that well. I thought it took away some of the clarity, and made it a little bit hard to understand the lyrics. Maybe try shortening the delay if you really want to keep it in the track. This would help the clarity issues. I really liked the delivery overall though. I thought there was great energy in the track. I have two more suggestions. First is to get original beats. You need to bring your own style to your own track. The second is to maybe spend a little more on the mix. If you mixed yourself then maybe pay a mix engineer to do the mix next time. If you had someone else mix it you can do one of two things. Either throw them a little more money to get better quality, or if that is their best, then try and find a better mix engineer. I like your style, and it is definitely something to work with. Just having a few things cleaned up will push you to that next level.
For my underground track, I listened to an artist from Maryland that goes by Infamous A-Smooth. The song I listened to was Step in the District. First and foremost I respect all artists, so I try and give them as much constructive criticism as possible. I always listen to the track about 20 times to get a good idea of what to say. I liked a few things about this song and a few things that I wasn’t feeling. I thought the hook was very repetitive. I like the idea of the hook, but maybe switch up a few things on every other two bars. Like instead of "you say you want it you say you got it" every time, come up with another bar and plug it in every other time. That’s just a suggestion though. Also, I don’t think the delay on the dub of the verse worked that well. I thought it took away some of the clarity, and made it a little bit hard to understand the lyrics. Maybe try shortening the delay if you really want to keep it in the track. This would help the clarity issues. I really liked the delivery overall though. I thought there was great energy in the track. I have two more suggestions. First is to get original beats. You need to bring your own style to your own track. The second is to maybe spend a little more on the mix. If you mixed yourself then maybe pay a mix engineer to do the mix next time. If you had someone else mix it you can do one of two things. Either throw them a little more money to get better quality, or if that is their best, then try and find a better mix engineer. I like your style, and it is definitely something to work with. Just having a few things cleaned up will push you to that next level.
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